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After
Tthe
World Health Organization (WHO)
removed Hong Kong from its list of SARS-infected areas
after
when the city recorded zero infections for 20 consecutive days,
China opened the gate for its people to visit Hong Kong in order to help
Hong Kong’s economic recovery. In fact, tourism helpsed
Hong Kong
to recover
the lost of the past
past losses and
making
made it
to become a more beautiful city.
After the
WHO removed Hong Kong from its
list of SARS-infected areas when the
city recorded zero infections for 20
consecutive days, China opened the gate
for its people to visit Hong Kong in
order to help Hong Kong’s economic
recovery. In fact, tourism helped Hong
Kong recover past losses and made it a
more beautiful city.
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